Sunday, July 27, 2008

Come Back

I wished
all would be the same
please,
let it come true.

I prayed
for you once more
please,
come back to me.

I saw you,
and you saw me.
please,
tell me all is forgiven.

10 comments:

Adam said...

I like this, Short but really nice!

Bela said...

Thanks Adam! I was really just brain dumping here...again.

Gina said...

This is almost exactly like the Dean Martin song "Return to Me"- read the lyrics: http://www.stlyrics.com/lyrics/returntome/returntome.htm

Gina said...

Isn't it basically required of you to brain dump here?

Bela said...

Oh I love Dean Martin! But oddly enough, I've never heard that song. I'll check it out and compare!

Too true about brain dumping. But still, I like my work to be cleaned up and final.

Andrew said...

Nice Poem

Bela said...

Hey Andrew. Haven't heard from you in a while. Where have you been? Thanks, though!

Bela said...

You know, guys. The strange thing about this poem is that I don't know what it's about. You know how you get a line that you love, so you decide to make something out of it, regardless of whether or not it means anything to you? Well, that's what I did.

Gina said...

Uh huh. I guess I'm so used to finding hidden meanings in your poems that I thought this was about... something...

Andrew said...

I've Been here, I just haven't dropped as many comments as before