Thursday, July 10, 2008

None For Me

You told me you were mine,
That you would never let go.
You told me you loved me,
And I loved you so.

You never would have left,
If she hadn't come along.
You had many choices,
and you chose wrong.

If times are changing,
But we stay the same,
You can never come back to me.
It is you who I blame.

You say yours is mine,
And mine is ours,
But what is left for me?

23 comments:

Maddie said...

aaaaaaaaaaaaah bela. when'd u write this one?

Bela said...

Last night. Why?

Maddie said...

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah

please go onto my blog.

Bela said...

I was just on there. Wait, why did you ask me that?

Maria said...

Great structure!!! & no awkward rhymes. This poem has a whole lotta soul & it's extremely honest.

I'm looking forward to seeing you on the van next week!

Bela said...

Wow! Thanks Maria! That means a lot coming from you! (no offense meant, if there is anything here that is offensive!)

Yay! Two more days! I wonder who the Newbies are going to be this year...

Andrew said...

Hey Bela,
I don't really get this one.... None for you? Hmm... I am confused on this one... I don't get how this poem transcends to the others. First you talk of true love, then being heartbroken? Quite a fast step eh? Just a little confuzzled.

Andrew said...

Oh I take back my last comment. I realized it was about uh... him.

Maddie said...

yeah..... hey andrew, i am maddie. I am well aware of everything that is going on. personally i call him the jerk, and other things that shouldn't be written down.

Bela said...

I'm glad you see the underlying theme!

Oh, Maddie...

Bela said...

And Andrew...this isn't the Maddie you know from the club...so don't worry.

Maddie said...

hahahahaha. there are other Maddies that know about this?!??! i think we should form a club to drive bela insane!

jkjk

Bela said...

You know, as fun as that sounds, I think the other Maddie's have lives.
Just kidding.







But seriously, they do.

Maddie said...

who said i don't? what are you doing tonight bela? sleepover with one of your best friends?

have you been busy every day with plans since the week that school was out? huh, bela, huh?

Bela said...

Actually, yes. I have been. And yes, my friend is staying over tonight.

Maddie said...

oh well, is it Noodle? huh, bela huh? cause unless you had like me, i think i win.

Bela said...

Remind me again: what's the prize?

Very mature, Maddie. Really, very mature.

CWP TOMORROW!!! WOOHOO!!!

Maddie said...

you know what, noodle likes me better!!!! OH!

Bela said...

Again, very mature.

CWP RIGHT NOW!!!

Maddie said...

I'm laughing. okay, lets stop. it's getting pretty bad.

Noodle loves both of us
(she just loves me more! jkjk)

Bela said...

Okay, sure. So, you excited for the second day of CWP? I am!

Maddie said...

when haven't I been excited is the question.

Bela said...

That is too true.