Monday, July 21, 2008

Past the End

Past that building, I used to stop
On those cold winter days.
To remind myself of what I lost,
and what I had to gain.

Although time was taken
from the covered rooftops,
we all felt the sorrow,

It all ended
when the winter came.
The past was erased,
and nothing was the same.

14 comments:

Mizz_M-Kay said...

omg this reminds me of me and edward bela ur scary good at writing comment mine plz i need some critizsim or however u spell that :)

Andrew said...

Hmmm... This one is nice. I love how the weather is a simile to the coldness of the raw emotion that you are feeling. So hows CWP?

Mizz_M-Kay said...

omg it's andrew if u read this hi i;m that crazi gurl on the phone yelling random stuff :)

Bela said...

Thanks! Tell me why it reminds you of edward and yourself...And I'll go onto your blog!

Thanks Andrew! Cwp is great! It's really the same course schedule over and over again...but the topic is always different!

Bela said...

Oh, Mara...

Andrew said...

Haha that was seriously you? I hope the topic is different. Any my response the the poll, which isn't really shocking is no. It's not a bad thing to write about. If you have feelings express them. Bela Check your email ;-)

Bela said...

Yeah, it's good to vary ideas. Yay! A person who supports my theory! I'm checking it right now...

Gina said...

And is this another Holocaust poem too? I was trying to figure out what it meant, it didn't make sense to me really until I thought about it that way.

Bela said...

I have to say, I don't really know what this is about. It sort of just came to me.

Gina said...

In a psychic vision?

Bela said...

Oh, aren't you the funny one. No, in a crystal ball. (existing comment oozing with sarcasm juice)

Gina said...

Sorry, too late to submit illustrations for the anthology- otherwise I would have done a drawing for sarcasm juice in addition to the one for creative juice.

Bela said...

Oh, HA HA. Aren't you witty. But I saw the Creative Juice ad...genius! But not witty...
























Okay, fine. A little witty.











































A tiny bit. That's all.






































Aaaahhhh! Stop interrogating me! Okay, okay. It was witty! Happy now? :)

Gina said...

Happy now, happy hence, happy ever after!















Just another Into the Woods sjoke for your benefit.