You told me you were mine,
That you would never let go.
You told me you loved me,
And I loved you so.
You never would have left,
If she hadn't come along.
You had many choices,
and you chose wrong.
If times are changing,
But we stay the same,
You can never come back to me.
It is you who I blame.
You say yours is mine,
And mine is ours,
But what is left for me?
This One Goes Out to All My Harry Potter Fans
13 years ago
23 comments:
aaaaaaaaaaaaah bela. when'd u write this one?
Last night. Why?
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
please go onto my blog.
I was just on there. Wait, why did you ask me that?
Great structure!!! & no awkward rhymes. This poem has a whole lotta soul & it's extremely honest.
I'm looking forward to seeing you on the van next week!
Wow! Thanks Maria! That means a lot coming from you! (no offense meant, if there is anything here that is offensive!)
Yay! Two more days! I wonder who the Newbies are going to be this year...
Hey Bela,
I don't really get this one.... None for you? Hmm... I am confused on this one... I don't get how this poem transcends to the others. First you talk of true love, then being heartbroken? Quite a fast step eh? Just a little confuzzled.
Oh I take back my last comment. I realized it was about uh... him.
yeah..... hey andrew, i am maddie. I am well aware of everything that is going on. personally i call him the jerk, and other things that shouldn't be written down.
I'm glad you see the underlying theme!
Oh, Maddie...
And Andrew...this isn't the Maddie you know from the club...so don't worry.
hahahahaha. there are other Maddies that know about this?!??! i think we should form a club to drive bela insane!
jkjk
You know, as fun as that sounds, I think the other Maddie's have lives.
Just kidding.
But seriously, they do.
who said i don't? what are you doing tonight bela? sleepover with one of your best friends?
have you been busy every day with plans since the week that school was out? huh, bela, huh?
Actually, yes. I have been. And yes, my friend is staying over tonight.
oh well, is it Noodle? huh, bela huh? cause unless you had like me, i think i win.
Remind me again: what's the prize?
Very mature, Maddie. Really, very mature.
CWP TOMORROW!!! WOOHOO!!!
you know what, noodle likes me better!!!! OH!
Again, very mature.
CWP RIGHT NOW!!!
I'm laughing. okay, lets stop. it's getting pretty bad.
Noodle loves both of us
(she just loves me more! jkjk)
Okay, sure. So, you excited for the second day of CWP? I am!
when haven't I been excited is the question.
That is too true.
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