Spotted
Among the bushes,
by a familiar face.
Noticed
So we hide in shame,
to not attract a crowd.
Found
And confronted,
Then boldly enough,
We empty our hearts.
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- This blog started with my very first writing course about four years ago. My main goal is to make it simple for every reader to relate every poem back to his or her own life. I want you, and any other person reading this, to think that anything is possible; that no matter what, a person can put their Heart on Paper!
35 comments:
Okay.... were there people making out behind some shrubbery?
"to not attract a crowd." "so as not to attract a crowd" would flow so much better. (No offense...)
I like how the first line of every stanza is one word, and how all the subsequent lines are no more than five short words long.
My first reaction was not Maria's, but now it makes more sense to me... I was thinking that you were hiding from someone who found you and hid too, in order to not gather attention, and then you talked to this person? Yeah, Maria's answer would explain your hestitance to elaborate...
OH! OH! I get it, you were talking to/making out with/? the person from the last poem!!!!
Right?
Maybe?
heyyyyyy gina, heyyyyyy maria.
as our lovely bela said, she does not want to elaborate. but i'd be perfectly happy to.
maria, you are exactly right. a worker at a country club caught two people...............
and gina.... it was definately NOT the jerk from the poems before. if you have any more questions, please email me.
AND CHECK OUT MY NEW BLOG AT:
http://maddie-live-laugh-love-write.blogspot.com/
I haven't writen any poems or anything yet. but i plan to. jsut check it out though.
Wow, Maria. Nice job! You've figured it out...
I love that line change! But as you pointed out, I am trying to use less than 5 words per line. Can I use it some other time, though? Seriously, it's really good!
Wow to Gina! This is a really interesting point of view! I never would have thought of that...
I'm still not elaborating.
MADDIE!!!!!!!!!!! I'm beginning to dislike you...STOP SPEAKING/TYPING WORDS!!!
And nice job with your advertising, Maddie.
But I still dislike you, as of right now.
okay..............dont be too thrilled yet. it wasnt bela, just one of her friends.
ooooOOOOOOoooooh....
Country club?? Oh yeah, that's right, you live in Weston... not going to say anything else! Seriously!
i know, i'm like you little_____!! those dang westin kids.
no offense
Very nice, Maddie. Thank you, I really appreciate it.
Oh no problem. I am just joking. But as you know, there is always a little truth behind a joke.
:p
Don't make me email you again...
Soo...anybody have a new subject?
Kidding. But Maria and Gina? I'll tell you all about it at CWP on Monday!
I WARN YOU, I'M TOTALLY KIDDING
I JUST WANT TO GIVE BELA A HARD TIME. NOTHING HAPPENED WITH HER!
bela, if nothing happened, then why won't you just come out and say it on this. It's not like anyone else reads this.
Haha, I get it. I know who it's about...
;-)
It's a really nice poem though.
P.P.S~ If you know who this is, then where does it say something about John, The Tennis Pro. Just Kidding.
Thanks for making it better, Maddie!
Hey Andrew! I think I might be giving away a bit too much there...but it would be true! Then again...who doesn't love having their imagination put an interesting self inflicted twist on writing?
Hm... this has turned out to be your most controversial poem yet! Still don't get why "we hide in shame", but whatever...
However much anyone tries to deny it, everyone loves gossip. Have you ever noticed that?
And Maddie, I do agree that there is always some truth behind a joke- or rather, behind a GOOD joke. The other ones are just stupid. The funniest ones are true. That's why there is so much political humor, I suppose...
I expect full detail on Monday, Bela, and I will hold you to it! And you're wondering who the "newbies" are?? That's a little high-minded for someone who was a "newbie" herself not so long ago... but I know one girl is coming who I used to sort of be friends with, I haven't seen her in YEARS.
Wow, long comment... see you later then...
Haha, most controversial? Quite. Yes, it is very apparent that this a simile to real life (no duh!), but maybe Bella (and I) shouldn't really elaborate on this one. "Hide in shame"? I wouldn't have necessarily called it shame, more or less, hidden from fear of an awkward tennis lesson... Hey George! What a convenient memory lapse!
OKAY Andrew, I think you have officially made my day.
Gina, Maria, are you smart enough to understand now?
Haha, more like smart enough to check the website again. Yeah I guess that's pretty much it. I doubt bela actually reads the comments but if you didn't get my email sorry about what happened this afternoon, I didn't know she would freak like that.
I resent that, Andrew.
If you're at the club tomorrow, you and I are going to have some words.
(Hush, Maddie!)
And I will tell you, Maria...if you don't get it already!
And Andrew, I definitely didn't freak out on her! And we WILL have some words.
Andrew, she basically tried to keep everything quiet, but you came on and.............
lol.
ahe checks her comments frequently so be warned.
Yes, be warned.
but do it funny, cause she was going to tell them in person tommorrow. so it's okay. you add something new and interesting.
Sorry guys, I don't think we are going to the club.
Not after the "Barrier Incident." I think that gives a lot away about who I am... but what ever..
Check out my blog..
www.thebookfreak.wordpress.com
^(NOT BLOGGER :P)
Again, nice advertising everyone!
(heart on paper)
No! Okay, well, I'll see you soon then, right?
def!
Nice! Sounds good!
noodle says hi!
Hi Noodle.
Bela, your boyfriend has a great sense of humor... I love that you're meeting him "at the club"...lol. (No, I'm not making fun of country clubs again, I'll explain later.)
Andrew, "fear of an awkward tennis lesson" sounds like the definition of a great new phobia. Send it to Merriam Webster.
"The Barrier Incident" sounds like the name of either an action movie off the coast of Austrailia or a horrible accident in a construction zone...
i totally agree with gina's last two comments.
Yeah, he does! It's one of the many thing I love about him...
Hmm...explain that later.
Wow, she's right. Send that one in, and it just might get published!
Why did "the Barrier Incident" just come up? Remind me again, please?
Oh wait...I just read the comments. I get what "the Barrier Incident" is. Please forgive my ability to process things quickly in my brain.
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