She comes as a false witness,
Separating us by rights.
But for how long?
She comes as a journey,
Keeping us along rough paths.
But will it always be this way?
She comes as a barrier,
Splitting us apart.
But we will be together soon.
This One Goes Out to All My Harry Potter Fans
13 years ago
31 comments:
Good Job Bela,
Sorry 'bout the meaning behind this one. I didn't know it would happen, I thought it was something else. Anyway, nice poem, and I hope you write a lot more poems like this (I mean not like angry depressed, but like nice...) whilst you are at CWP. Good Luck!
~A
this is good....
who's A? is it Augusta?
Thanks Andrew! And sorry about you-know-what. Quick question: why is the screen name rainos?
And no Maddie...it's Andrew.
ooooooooooooo. why'd he switch from andrew? it made it clearer.
Oh I used my blogger account before, and I just claimed it, but yeah it is still me, I just hadn't changed the screen name.
~A
o that's cool. i guess when i see ~A with any name, I'll know it's you.
So now that we have that covered...
Andrew: were you the one going on the blog saying "Hey, it's a friend." and going by A? I got kind of freaked out.
o yeah, i was thinking about that. i thought that that was definately Augusta.
Yeah, that's what I thought.
hmmmmmmmmmm, well.........
I think so.... I can't remember how many comments I have left on this blog (too many!) yeah it was probably me but I can't remember, maybe or maybe not...
Oh, alright...well, I like that you're commenting still!
Yay! We're at CWP right now!
AHEM. Is this about a jealous ex-girlfriend coming between you and the person you like?? Maybe?? I guess you finally found who the A friend was...
yeah, was it bela?
Oh no, it wasn't an ex-girlfriend...I'll tell you later!
You know you will, or else...
Just kidding, that's creepy.
Or an overprotective mother not allowing two young people to date?? And Andrew, Bela writes an awful lot of angry depressed poems, I don't think this will change anytime soon.
You got it right Gina! Except for the description of her...
And they are not depressed! If there's something on my mind, I try to put an emotion into a piece of writing...and normally it comes out in different ways because I get confused.
Angry and depressed? You should see my novel. Just kidding.
Haha! See, Gina. I told you...it's a writing style, not an outlook on life. Thanks Andrew!
bela, they can be a little depressed, and you do tend to get deeply into whatever emotion it is you are writing.
Actually, when writing, being able to put yourself into a certain emotion full heartedly is an excellent trait to have.
Actually, when writing, being able to put yourself into a certain emotion full heartedly is an excellent trait to have.
okay, you didn't have to repeat yourself. :p
i'm not saying it's a bad thing...
Whoops, sorry! The computer was a little messed up and printed it out twice!
it's cool
Okay, good to know.
So... salamanders.
Lizards.
Iguanas.
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