You awaken me,
dusting gossamer webs
and compelling my legs to cover ground.
Whispers you endow
embrace a newborn,
my ringing ears
sensitive to the sound of your words
and the silences between.
In one swift motion,
your mind enters mine
and I am entranced by your thoughts.
I empty myself,
my world in your hands
as you dance around the simplistic idea
of our coalescence.
Drifting mindlessly,
I live
but to feel the warmth of your touch;
my own face and fingers
outstretched,
alive, alive in your sight.
This One Goes Out to All My Harry Potter Fans
12 years ago
3 comments:
I am far too overwhelmed to comment on this. It's truly beautiful, as you are able to string words together wonderfully, but it seems slightly choppy unless read in the right tone.
A great God-concept, though. Was that what you were aiming for?
I will write back with more later.
I suppose it is slightly choppier than most of my work, but thank you all the same :) A God-concept...yes, somewhat. I guess it could be anything, but as it pertains to me, it leans toward God/spirituality in general.
Look forward to hearing more :)
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