Wednesday, June 11, 2008

Darkness

Darkness.
A castaway island,
a place in my mind.

Deprived.
It was snatched away,
It was never given back.

Depression.
Where you once stood,
There is emptiness.

There is emptiness,
Where you once stood.
Depression.

It was never given back,
It was snatched away.
Deprived.

A place in my mind,
A castaway island.
Darkness.

4 comments:

Gina said...

I was wondering where you were going with this... I think they called it a mirror poem?

Bela said...

Oh. Gotcha! I'm working on that recommendation, I haven't forgotten! I'm almost done with it!

Maddie said...

recommendation 4 wat???????????

bela, this is a great mirror poem. can't wait 2 cu at cwp. i have great things planned.

Bela said...

Gina and I challenged each other...and I haven't seen her side f the bet yet! Keep working, Gina!