When you're gone,
my heart shatters
as I sit waist deep
in thoughts of you.
This empty home
has left me alone.
I'm waiting for you
to open the door.
Save me,
I'm drowning in shame.
If you're gone,
maybe life will start anew.
Memories will collapse
in the wrinkle of endless time,
opportunity will knock
at the door of my hollow heart.
I'm home,
emptier than before.
Soon you're gone,
dreams disappear
in the mind of a child,
weary from battling armored reality.
I am who I have lost;
an illusion of fate,
wrapped around your little finger.
Forever,
I am waiting.
my heart shatters
as I sit waist deep
in thoughts of you.
This empty home
has left me alone.
I'm waiting for you
to open the door.
Save me,
I'm drowning in shame.
If you're gone,
maybe life will start anew.
Memories will collapse
in the wrinkle of endless time,
opportunity will knock
at the door of my hollow heart.
I'm home,
emptier than before.
Soon you're gone,
dreams disappear
in the mind of a child,
weary from battling armored reality.
I am who I have lost;
an illusion of fate,
wrapped around your little finger.
Forever,
I am waiting.
13 comments:
Is this another one to your dad?
Actually, yeah! It's addressed to another person, too, though. And guess what...?
ANOTHER 5 LETTERED NAME! How odd...
I thought so. Hm...Jordan?
Word Verification: alicely
She fell down the hole, alicely
Jordan's six letters =) hmm what about Roger?
RRRRROOOGGGEEEERRRRR
I like the sound of that one.
hey bela, so i really like this, especially the part:
dreams disappear
in the mind of a child,
weary from battling armored reality.
It's not my fault that I can't count....:)
Is he a Jolly Roger?
Thanks, Noodle =) And yes, Gina...he's the ultimate Jolly Roger. WOO! Haha
Your "poll" on the side there really spoke to me just now.
I wanted to vote for the first option. :(
Hey, I came across your blog in Google. Good writing!
Thought I'd comment because your blog is called the same as mine.
Have a great day.
Jack.
http://cwpfairfield.org/
Look at the banner at the bototm of the page--who is that, all the way to that right?
Thanks so much everyone! I'll definitely check out that website, and haha, wow Jack! What a weird coincidence =)
Gina! It's our writing group! =D
bwahahahaaaaaaa....
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