Wednesday, March 4, 2009

Away From Here

Take my hand,
let's run away.
There's no one here,
no reason to stay.
Come run with me,
maybe we'll float to the stars.

We found a way when we began.
We've reached the edge,
let's jump while we can.
If we make it through,
I'd love to tell them all.

Keep your chin up,
don't look down.
We're falling fast,
let's hope we don't drown.
Those tears of yours
don't ever seem to stop.

There's not a trace,
where have we been?
What kind of hope
can we find within?
There's a fading sadness,
will we ever be the same?

26 comments:

Gina said...

A dentist.

Maria got it at the same time I did.

Bela said...

Nice! Haha, you guys are fast!


So...poem?

Gina said...

Why are so many of your poems about escape? And then, somehow, nothing really changes after the attempt to escape is made-- "We're falling fast,/let's hope we don't drown./Those tears of yours/don't ever seem to stop." And the last stanza ends the poem rather bewilderdly.

Bewildered-- does that have something to do with becoming so clueless as to be compared with a wild animal?

Bela said...

Yay! An actual person! Haha, kidding...but thanks for stopping by :)

Well...yeah, that's definitely my theme of the moment...but the ending is supposed to leave the reader hanging, as the events have left "me" hanging by a minute or moment and I just don't have a clue about what to do.

Gina said...

I meant for you to look up the etymology, eighth grader XD

Bela said...

Um...for what, exactly? Sorry, it's been one of those days. :)

Gina said...

bewildered

Bela said...

Um...so this is one of those do-what-I-say-little-eighth-grader-or-I'll-squash-you moments?

Gina said...

No, I was totally kidding :) But I'm actually interested in knowing where it comes from.

WORD VERIFICATION: demagica :) ha ha

Bela said...

Haha! Oh, gotcha :)

So what's new in the world of Gina? (/Maria)

Gina said...

Well, Maria just participated in the New England Music Festival... they sounded really good :) The car ride home was really fun[ny] because we were driving two other students home... ask about "Grandpa Turtle"

Bela said...

Hey! That's great! How did she do?

Okay...what about "Grandpa Turtle"?

Gina said...

They sounded fantastic :) I meant ask Maria.

Gina said...

Psst... if you want to say hi to Tony, he commented on Maria's latest addition to the CWP site.


Hee hee. :)

Bela said...

I know! I just saw...I'm going to have fun with this one :)

But don't worry, Maria...you know I wouldn't embarrass you too badly :)





Just Kidding. I'll try not to embarrass you :)

Gina said...

Key word- try. ;)

Bela said...

Pretty much...yeah :)

Gina said...

How's the novel coming, Miss Bela?

Bela said...

Not at all bad, Miss Gina. I haven't had much time to write lately, (Note the date of my last post...) But I'm almost done with the book, believe it or not. I'm trying really hard to drag out the ending events that way it's a little longer...do you guys know the exact length of a novel?

Gina said...

Is that a trick question? I generally think of a novel as being 150-200 pages long; a novella, 25-90 pages long. So that's some gray area... Hm.

By the way, I did look up the etymology of bewlidered for myself, seeing as you wouldn't do it for me. ;)

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WORD VERIFICATION: flyzinne
Contest for best definition!

Bela said...

Flyzinne: a large rope used to tie a yacht at a dock.

Haha, then I have a novel so far! Right now, in book format, 1.5 spacing, 14 font, I have 140 pages :)

Bela said...

Well, technically right now I'm under, but I'm not done yet :)

Gina said...

Nice :)

Let's do it again!
WORD VERIFICATION: radab
Go go, Bela, go go!

Gina said...

This comments page is getting rather long... perhaps it is time you posted a cinquain.

Line 1:
one word
(subject or noun)

Line 2:
two words
(adjectives) that describe line 1

Line 3:
three words
(action verbs) that relate to line 1

Line 4:
four words
(feelings or a complete sentence) that relates to line 1

Line 5:
one word
(synonym of line 1 or a word that sums it up)

Gina said...

Hey-- if you want examples of voice, go to shwyd.blogspot.com. It's a really cool site anyway-- people send in their stories of a day in their life (shwyd= So, how was your day?) It's interesting because it's a mix between crucial, defining days of one's life and just normal days for the writer. I think you should check it out (can you tell I'm a fan? Haha.)

Bela said...

Radab: a thin cream or ointment used to soothe itchiness or irritation on one's knees.

Cinquain? Possibly...I'll try it if I can...

Haha! I'll definitely check out that site! Sounds like fun :)