Your hand extends,
dark eyes flickering as the moon
casts a shadow over
clenched palms.Teeth grind,
scraping against cracked lips
that refuse to part.
Mind,
body,
and soul
stand alone, disappearing
while silent screams
beg for freedom,
suffocating as a broken
looking glass
spills burning raindrops.
Eyes shift
unsteadily,
heart beats
violently.
Words collapse
under the weight of time.
No escape, no goodbyes.
I love you.
9 comments:
Someone's hiding their feelings....haha. Better comment tomorrow when I'm sane.
But of course, as always :) Agreed...9 hours in Jersey? I don't care if it's jazz (Yay!) or not, that's a long, long time...
Well, we left school at 3:45, got to the place at 5, left at like 10:30 and got back at 11:30-12. So not in Jersey the whole time, but still.....
What I like about this poem is that the whole idea of being stuck and in a very uncomfortable position, every part of the body viscerally reacting against the thing unsaid. Love is uncomfortable. Or at least that's what I got from this. :D
Gina...YOU WIN! You got the idea practically word for word :)
You are truly #1 to HOP :D
Yayyyyy............I finally have a purpose in life. Lqtm.
But seriously, this stuff trains me so that when I have to answer stupid questions in English class, I am well-prepared. Haha.
VERIFICATION: facres
facres = fake acres?
Haha, I love you :) Yay for...hmm...analytical preparation!
We need to find things to discuss...
Seriously....haha
Well, HOWDY, Maria!
Well howdy thur little missy!
Violent, desperate images.... and then suddenly it ends. Hmmm.
Word Verf: eardersh. Amazin!
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