Wednesday, February 25, 2009

Maybe You Can Help Me...

Hi everyone,
As you can see, this isn't exactly a poem.
Just wanted to ask a couple of questions,
for those of you that are willing to answer.

Well, basically I've added a bit of a minor
plot twist in my book so as to not make it cliche.
But, because I want to keep my book from ending
on a "cliche-note" (haha!), I need to make sure I don't
have a cliche sort of ending...obviously. My my my,
I'm a bit redundant today...

But really, I need feedback. Gina, Maria, Maddie...
(and I think Kenzie...)
You all know about it. But if any of my other blogger
buddies want to help out and need a hint, I'm here!

That's all, folks!
And please, just this once,
put your heart on THIS paper!
(Work with me here, I know it's not really paper...)
- Bela

11 comments:

Gina said...

It would obviously help my ability to come up with good ideas IF I KNEW WHAT I WAS COMING UP WITH IDEAS FOR.

Maria said...

Agreed ^

Bela said...

Never mind! I've decided on an ending! Thanks anyways, though :)

Gina said...

Love you too, Bela.

Bela said...

Oh, come now, I'll let you read it :)


And edit. If you're lucky :D

Gina said...

"And I know
That I am, I am,
I am the luckiest"
-Ben Folds "The Luckiest"

Bela said...

Lovely. How...poetic :)

Maria said...

Ben Folds rocks my socks

Gina said...

Ben Folds rocks my socks more.

Bela, you should look up the rest of the lyrics to this song. They will seem sort of simple or even childish, but become very pretty when set to music.

Bela said...

Okay! Sounds good!

Maddie said...

belaaaaaaaa! omg i havent talked to you in forever. i was sooo excited to help you and then caflooey, you figured it out for yourself.