tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4085540941293420499.post7785735560745927769..comments2023-09-04T05:56:54.694-07:00Comments on Heart on Paper: MistakesBelahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03972018516179552839noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4085540941293420499.post-13828264585030833352008-11-27T20:02:00.000-08:002008-11-27T20:02:00.000-08:00Just doing my part to deviate the conversation fro...Just doing my part to deviate the conversation from discussing the snottiness of being pleased.Ginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07481111584970132557noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4085540941293420499.post-88893491857338911392008-09-20T18:39:00.000-07:002008-09-20T18:39:00.000-07:00I'm confused.I'm confused.Belahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03972018516179552839noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4085540941293420499.post-78160424629576695622008-07-17T08:05:00.000-07:002008-07-17T08:05:00.000-07:00A brown cat walked into a blue house. Suddenly, t...A brown cat walked into a blue house. Suddenly, they both noticed a yellow fly sitting on a wall and decided to attack. How many peppers were harmed?Ginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07481111584970132557noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4085540941293420499.post-5466839598294128502008-07-16T08:11:00.000-07:002008-07-16T08:11:00.000-07:00Okay, then...Okay, then...Belahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03972018516179552839noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4085540941293420499.post-54887126819144633302008-07-15T20:25:00.000-07:002008-07-15T20:25:00.000-07:00i bet you are!!!!!!!!!(said in a pleased almost sn...i bet you are!!!!!!!!!<BR/>(said in a pleased almost snotty manner)Maddiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16931137327341560708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4085540941293420499.post-66802706082750628492008-07-15T14:41:00.000-07:002008-07-15T14:41:00.000-07:00Oh I'm so pleased. On the inside!Oh I'm so pleased. On the inside!Belahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03972018516179552839noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4085540941293420499.post-90351331146168976262008-07-14T20:15:00.000-07:002008-07-14T20:15:00.000-07:00i thought you'd be pleased!i thought you'd be pleased!Maddiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16931137327341560708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4085540941293420499.post-35804525620005440262008-07-14T16:34:00.000-07:002008-07-14T16:34:00.000-07:00Lucky me.Lucky me.Belahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03972018516179552839noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4085540941293420499.post-22055293254170542082008-07-14T15:13:00.000-07:002008-07-14T15:13:00.000-07:00I have plenty more, don't worry.I have plenty more, don't worry.Maddiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16931137327341560708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4085540941293420499.post-11529097722608195922008-07-14T08:08:00.000-07:002008-07-14T08:08:00.000-07:00Save it for the luchbreak, Maddie.Save it for the luchbreak, Maddie.Belahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03972018516179552839noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4085540941293420499.post-75914548386839709772008-07-14T08:07:00.000-07:002008-07-14T08:07:00.000-07:00no, i am kind. i just like to have fun with you.no, i am kind. i just like to have fun with you.Maddiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16931137327341560708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4085540941293420499.post-17075925192162022242008-07-14T07:33:00.000-07:002008-07-14T07:33:00.000-07:00You're cruel.You're cruel.Belahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03972018516179552839noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4085540941293420499.post-20877753248182031332008-07-13T17:46:00.000-07:002008-07-13T17:46:00.000-07:00your mistake was writing this......jkjkyour mistake was writing this......<BR/><BR/>jkjkMaddiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16931137327341560708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4085540941293420499.post-60014345266306961112008-07-12T07:18:00.000-07:002008-07-12T07:18:00.000-07:00Maria - Throughout the poem, it's almost as if whe...Maria - Throughout the poem, it's almost as if when I looked back, I couldn't remember anything. So if I were to keep one memory...well, that creates the second stanza.<BR/><BR/>I'm going to look, Maddie!<BR/><BR/>Yay! I'm so glad you commented, Andrew! Reminisce would be a good title! I was going for Mistakes because this poem is supposed to be like a journey between two people. And within everyBelahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03972018516179552839noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4085540941293420499.post-17074406806345316502008-07-12T07:06:00.000-07:002008-07-12T07:06:00.000-07:00Personally, I think that mistakes is an inadequate...Personally, I think that mistakes is an inadequate name to call this poem. Reminisce? Something more along the lines of something happier. It just kind of shouts that to me (Oxymoron?) Anyway my personal opinion<BR/><BR/><BR/>~AAndrewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00024224548357059952noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4085540941293420499.post-50955893154912453112008-07-11T19:28:00.000-07:002008-07-11T19:28:00.000-07:00look at my comment on the previous poem. you'll ge...look at my comment on the previous poem. you'll get it then.Maddiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16931137327341560708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4085540941293420499.post-62995467414482188382008-07-11T19:24:00.000-07:002008-07-11T19:24:00.000-07:00The second-to-last stanza kind of strays from the ...The second-to-last stanza kind of strays from the structure of the rest of the poem, but otherwise it's good.<BR/><BR/>Ah, Bela... always so profound!Mariahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10381618075198783212noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4085540941293420499.post-105535005596221012008-07-11T18:47:00.000-07:002008-07-11T18:47:00.000-07:00What?What?Belahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03972018516179552839noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4085540941293420499.post-12817238529026885082008-07-11T18:29:00.000-07:002008-07-11T18:29:00.000-07:00o bela.........................o bela.........................Maddiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16931137327341560708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4085540941293420499.post-70295609225860020382008-07-11T13:10:00.000-07:002008-07-11T13:10:00.000-07:00Seriously...what are you talking about?Seriously...what are you talking about?Belahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03972018516179552839noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4085540941293420499.post-85087699027424972642008-07-11T13:05:00.000-07:002008-07-11T13:05:00.000-07:00Um, no I don't.Um, no I don't.Belahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03972018516179552839noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4085540941293420499.post-74272442590682513102008-07-10T17:42:00.000-07:002008-07-10T17:42:00.000-07:00i wont comment............you know what i think.i wont comment............you know what i think.Maddiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16931137327341560708noreply@blogger.com