tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4085540941293420499.post6024558937507295416..comments2023-09-04T05:56:54.694-07:00Comments on Heart on Paper: A True LoveBelahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03972018516179552839noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4085540941293420499.post-3970631470266419742008-07-10T10:18:00.000-07:002008-07-10T10:18:00.000-07:00Sorry, I'm already paying for my parent's retireme...Sorry, I'm already paying for my parent's retirement. (Existing comment dripping with sarcasm)Belahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03972018516179552839noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4085540941293420499.post-7256388315916933372008-07-08T16:41:00.000-07:002008-07-08T16:41:00.000-07:00of course........u will give me a small cut for se...of course........u will give me a small cut for seggesting that, and for being the most amazing person in the world..............lol.Maddiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16931137327341560708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4085540941293420499.post-80610631736992766062008-06-24T08:32:00.000-07:002008-06-24T08:32:00.000-07:00Thanks Maddie! And who knows...maybe I will!!!But ...Thanks Maddie! And who knows...maybe I will!!!<BR/>But you guys have to, too!!!Belahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03972018516179552839noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4085540941293420499.post-16269489590197161662008-06-20T08:43:00.000-07:002008-06-20T08:43:00.000-07:00this was good, bela you seem to keep surprising me...this was good, bela you seem to keep surprising me with all the different styles you can master. if you do not write for a living, or if you don't share your work, i think it could keep you from making millions, and make me very upset with you.Maddiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16931137327341560708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4085540941293420499.post-81999752490155159282008-06-18T13:38:00.000-07:002008-06-18T13:38:00.000-07:00Thanks, Gina! Gotcha! (and I know it's from Romeo ...Thanks, Gina! Gotcha! (and I know it's from Romeo and Juliet, how good is that play?) Ooohh...I forgot about my challenge to you...hmm...<BR/>I'll keep thinking of one!Belahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03972018516179552839noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4085540941293420499.post-20914965110938277862008-06-17T16:40:00.000-07:002008-06-17T16:40:00.000-07:00Woot woot! Good job, Bela! One custom-made sonne...Woot woot! Good job, Bela! One custom-made sonnet hot off the presses. The one thing I would ask you to change (and this could be somewhat important, depending on how badly you want a "perfect" sonnet) is the rhythm of a few of the lines, because they don't fall within the iambic pentameter. That just has to do with the stress of the syllables, like this: but SOFT what LIGHT through YONder Ginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07481111584970132557noreply@blogger.com