tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4085540941293420499.post4650779988945660409..comments2023-09-04T05:56:54.694-07:00Comments on Heart on Paper: Falling on Our HeadsBelahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03972018516179552839noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4085540941293420499.post-41151559799184678602011-07-14T11:06:36.464-07:002011-07-14T11:06:36.464-07:00Seeing the poem post-grenade issue, I can't ev...Seeing the poem post-grenade issue, I can't even quite tell where it would have gone. The only problem I have with this is "knotted hair that's drips dissipate in the folds of your soaked shirt." I don't know what "that's" is supposed to mean, maybe you meant something else. Other than that one word, I think this is a lovely poem. Glad to see you're Ginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07481111584970132557noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4085540941293420499.post-84344219315057931172011-05-19T14:11:23.867-07:002011-05-19T14:11:23.867-07:00Much appreciated, P@N! Will do. Thanks to you, too...Much appreciated, P@N! Will do. Thanks to you, too, Chance..I'll see what I can do to fix this poem up :)Belahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03972018516179552839noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4085540941293420499.post-8126361175802977602011-05-18T05:53:53.939-07:002011-05-18T05:53:53.939-07:00Those were just my thoughts....and do keep posting...Those were just my thoughts....and do keep posting i love themAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12297729071702990961noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4085540941293420499.post-60658380850359770982011-05-17T15:42:26.277-07:002011-05-17T15:42:26.277-07:00I disagree. "Grenade" is the least harsh...I disagree. "Grenade" is the least harsh word you can use in this situation and still get your point across.<br />Don't change a thing, Miss Bela.T.A. Chancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09425087842116246380noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4085540941293420499.post-15176437473049734982011-05-17T15:30:07.641-07:002011-05-17T15:30:07.641-07:00Thank you very much! Hm, a great point. I'll l...Thank you very much! Hm, a great point. I'll look into that :)<br /><br />And thanks for stopping by!Belahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03972018516179552839noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4085540941293420499.post-54736168898101997812011-05-17T10:10:00.832-07:002011-05-17T10:10:00.832-07:00Love the image the poem creates...It's really ...Love the image the poem creates...It's really beautiful but the grenade do seem kind of out of order in the imagery...would have been better if you had used something more apt to the imageAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12297729071702990961noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4085540941293420499.post-69282008601165154392011-05-12T10:20:17.478-07:002011-05-12T10:20:17.478-07:00and yeah the grenades do kind of blow up the image...and yeah the grenades do kind of blow up the image mid way something more apt with the image would be better...it's just my thoughts anywaysAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12297729071702990961noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4085540941293420499.post-63131273916584443332011-05-12T10:07:37.402-07:002011-05-12T10:07:37.402-07:00Another beautifull poem i love the image you have ...Another beautifull poem i love the image you have created....but it's been a long time since your'e lastpost. Do write more cause they are lovelyAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12297729071702990961noreply@blogger.com