tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4085540941293420499.post4152713407730385459..comments2023-09-04T05:56:54.694-07:00Comments on Heart on Paper: My LifeBelahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03972018516179552839noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4085540941293420499.post-76640840612842528462008-12-19T10:55:00.000-08:002008-12-19T10:55:00.000-08:00Haha! Thanks, Maddie!Haha! Thanks, Maddie!Belahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03972018516179552839noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4085540941293420499.post-15983099013019175352008-12-13T19:31:00.000-08:002008-12-13T19:31:00.000-08:00i loved the last two lines of this poem :)i loved the last two lines of this poem :)Maddiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16931137327341560708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4085540941293420499.post-15819575649436318242008-12-05T15:00:00.000-08:002008-12-05T15:00:00.000-08:00Okay, so I deleted the last 2 lines from the poem....Okay, so I deleted the last 2 lines from the poem. I just didn't like the whole rhyme scheme...tres tres corny, no?Belahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03972018516179552839noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4085540941293420499.post-17062004454536355802008-12-04T13:41:00.000-08:002008-12-04T13:41:00.000-08:00No, she's not asking everyone...she's searching ev...No, she's not asking everyone...she's searching everywhere. BIG DIFFERENCE. =D<BR/><BR/>This is more like MY story, not my dad's and mine. Call it...my perception of my own life. How much more specific can you get? Kidding, kidding!<BR/><BR/>Yes, good catch. But by saying that I am a face in the crowd, I'm implying that I blend into it all. So, my voice would blend into everyone else's. REALLY Belahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03972018516179552839noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4085540941293420499.post-5385307048543988172008-12-03T19:50:00.000-08:002008-12-03T19:50:00.000-08:00Is this poem about the same thing as today's other...Is this poem about the same thing as today's other poem? I'm confused... Like I said in my extremely long comment on the other poem, a more specific title would shed all the light needed on this poem.<BR/><BR/>2nd to last stanza: metaphor consistency issue: you are a <B>face</B> in the crowd, which woud generally tend to make you invisible, not inaudible.Ginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07481111584970132557noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4085540941293420499.post-22222252559987150932008-12-03T19:47:00.000-08:002008-12-03T19:47:00.000-08:00One question: How is it the speaker's choice if sh...One question: How is it the speaker's choice if she's asking everyone what the answer is?Ginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07481111584970132557noreply@blogger.com